12-23-2010 03:34 AM
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Full Metal Alchemist The Secret Chronicles (Comic Brainstorm)
Finally I decided to transform this thread (Initially it was a free commision illustration) into a free commision comic. The funny thing is than you decides the storyline!!

Here is some rules to post (rules could change):

Rules involving the story:

-Be a registered user in this forum
-Have more than 10 messages (not spam messages, useful one)
-Cloned user will be rejected.

Rules for help on translation:

-Be a registered user in this forum
-English/japanese should to be your main language.
-Cloned user will be rejected.

Rules for give a view:

-Don't insult.
-Try to post a constructive review, not just talk shit.

Things to have in mind:

-Try to keep a coherence with the story.
-You can try to introduce new characters, but again keeping coherence with the story.
-You can post a very basic idea like "They go to a supermarket" or a more detailed one like "They go to a supermarket because need condoms and meet another 2 guys, at the 1st time they don't pay so much attention till find them kissing at the ice cream section" (even more detailed) you decides.
-You can also vote about other people posting like "I love the previous post!!"
-Can also mix ideas from others users to make a new one.
-Users which posted and used his idea, will lower the chances for next posting in favor of others users, but it don't mean you haven't chances, so post post post!!

I have the last work over the story and I will keep drawing pages when I got free time. Those pages will not be so detailed like Detective Puzzle or others of my payment comics, the objetive of this experiment is to improved my skills with my new pens and tools, so I want to practice with the draw and not greyscales or color. This way I will also draw more pages in same time.

One more thing... I have the rights over this comic, but always I will mention everybody than help on it. Cause of that I will have a log of people ideas I used:

Art by Crazylove, Idea by Superbaralover.
Page 1:Story: Crazylove, Translation help: Zovi
Page 2:Story: Crazylove, Translation help: Zovi
Page 3:Story: Crazylove, Translation help: Zovi
Page 4:Story: Crazylove, Translation help: ???
Page 5:Story: Crazylove, Translation help: ???
Page 6:Story: Crazylove, Translation help: ???

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Unchecked english pages (you can help on this!)



Korean version

Translated by LeeSoonJae.


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12-27-2010 08:19 AM
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RE: Free commisions (rules and posting)
Did you want us to post in this thread?
Btw, I have an idea for a commission?
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12-28-2010 01:09 AM
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RE: Free commisions (rules and posting)
Yeah, post in this thread. Since I did a free commision for you recently (even if I did like a paid one) it will lower your chances to won over the other people, but if you have a better idea it could be done.
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12-28-2010 06:39 AM
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RE: Free commisions (rules and posting)
Thats fine with me!
BTW, I actually have two commissions for you. One paid and the other hopefully free. Whats more, both commissions are from the same series. I'll give you the details on the paid one later.

Roku and Sozin from Avatar: The Last Airbender.
http://piandao.org/screencaps/ep46/ep46-1108.png
http://piandao.org/screencaps/ep46/ep46-1165.png

Or just Roku. I'm not really in a position to ask for alot.
http://piandao.org/screencaps/ep46/ep46-935.png
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12-28-2010 09:22 AM
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RE: Free commisions (rules and posting)
About the paid one, I'm waiting for it. You know, you can open a new thread about it, sent me a PM or an e-mail to crazylovebbd[at]gmail.com (you know, switch [at] to @)any way is ok.

About your suggestions for the free one, we will wait for other people. Since is not posting at the main page of the blog yet, not so much people know about it. I don't know if post it already or wait till I move to the new house. By other way I'm thinking to transform it into a new and more funny idea, something like an interactive comic. I set an start and everyone can post and say how whould continue.
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12-28-2010 01:30 PM
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Understood.
I'll open a thread.
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12-29-2010 01:26 PM
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I edited the 1st post with the new idea. I'm working to do few pages to start with it, I think it will be done around the end of next week or so.
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Cool.
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Ok, this will start with 6 pages, it whould be poster around the end or the week or so.
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Edit: Ok, forgot all I said previously. The will keep the story I was doing for me. Reasons later. Also, seem my move to a new house has been put off on undefined time.

But don't worry, I will continue with this. The only change is now you can decide how it start. So post now!! You can make a completly new thing or based on any manga/anime/videogame/others just like Naruto, Bleach, Dragon Ball, Street Fighter, KOF... anything.

Remember, posting the 1st one it don't mean you will be selected, the best one will. Please, try don't bored me :P

You have a week to post a begin, but if someone post something I feel really I love it and I have free time maybe will be closed before.
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RE: Comic Brainstorm (free comic, rules and posting)
Roku and Sozin from Avatar: The Last Airbender.
http://piandao.org/screencaps/ep46/ep46-1108.png
http://piandao.org/screencaps/ep46/ep46-1165.png

http://piandao.org/screencaps/ep46/ep46-935.png
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01-10-2011 04:58 PM
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RE: Comic Brainstorm (free comic, rules and posting)
Is someone asking me by MSN about what is the limit. I will ask the same thing:

The story can be on anything. Even you can just post you want to see X characters and maybe other people could post the story or mix posting from others users or mix characters from series like naruto + bleach or anything.

The only limit in on shota as ussual (I don't mind to put some child naked if story needs, but not having sex)
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01-10-2011 05:10 PM
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Should I open a new thread on the comic?
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Nope, post all over here.
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RE: Comic Brainstorm (free comic, rules and posting)
What's about something based on FMA? I love Sig Curtis and King Bradley, but that anime series have a lot of sexy characters like Fu, Grumman, Raven, Marcoh, Darius, Heinkel... even Van Hohenheim and the homunculus father.
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RE: Comic Brainstorm (free comic, rules and posting)
I like FMA, and I agree about have a lot of sexy characters.

The problem with Avatar is... I don't know so much about that series. I only seen about 5-6 chapters.
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FMA does have hot guys.

I've gotta say that an erotic comic with Hohenheim and the homunculus father (in his human form) would be pretty hot.
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RE: Comic Brainstorm (free comic, rules and posting)
Yeah, is one alredy with both of them, but by any reason is more a tentacle manga, what a waste ¬_¬

I've thinking on something about FMA, but I want to read other people before.
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I have a quick idea, I can go into more detail if you'd like.

A short skinny college student goes to a gym in hopes to gain some weight and stop being so skinny. Have a scene where he's walking to the gym and thinking to himself how miserable he is because of how skinny he is. And how unfortunate it is that he is a hard gainer.

When he gets to the gym he asks if there are any personal trainers that could give him a little help creating a routine for himself. and the man behind the desk stands up to reveal a huge muscular body. the skinny main character (let's just call him joe for now) is in awe for a scene and then the muscular guy says he'd be happy to give him a quick lesson with a membership.

they agree and he brings him into the weight room.

i guess the rest is up to your imagination. maybe a relationship would kindle or it would just be quick casual sex.

I'm a writer so this kind of stuff comes pretty quickly to me, i'm not to focused on the sex, i was just jerking off and found a link to this thread on some bara board. figured i'd give you some ideas. if you want any more i'd be happy to oblige.

also it's very late so excuse the grammar
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RE: Comic Brainstorm (free comic, rules and posting)
Hi!

Thank you very much about your post. I'm glad about you words, but I'm sad cause I should to warning about the rules. It say you need 10 messages to join the Brainstorm.

You can post in other threads and sent useful messages, comment my drawings, video games, comics... I will be happy to read anything you said about it

Don't worry about grammar, my main language is not english so I don't notice it
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